i mean if it was just one person, i'd say you'll be fine. i believe they were looking for west of ireland to dublin, but your idea would also work, as it's for the same reasons (work, education, standard of living etc) and it tends to be individual
I wrote about Calcutta which was away off the topic but I did speak about them leaving because of war and in search of better lifestyle, job etc and it would abandon agricultural land. Will I get 1 or 2 marks out of 10 for effort?
You will get your marks as you talked about people migrating from one place to another and not being forced and also you didnt refer to a mass exodus such as the refugees coming to Europe or the British and Scottish coming to Ulster during the plantations which is also an example of organised migration