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Is this a good irish essay for the jc ?
by Stargirl Junior Cert Irish — 02/12/16 2

Is this a good irish essay for the jc ? Any mistakes ? Should I add anything more ?


2 Comments
shanemacken2000 — 02/12/16
It's really good but maybe change it so it's happening to you and not who you're with. You need more a lot focus on describing what happens to Aoife and what happened after she as taken away (hospital, doctors, etc). I always broke my leg no matter what the story was (this was the one on my junior cert), and that let me focus and structure paragraphs so I could always use the same phrases and descriptions.
Stargirl — 02/12/16
Our teacher told us that to write about someone else when writing out our story. As I can see everything in the story
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